Symphony
in my sleep I can see us smile
in my sleep I can hear us laugh
in my sleep I remember our everything
I open my eyes and see people
I hear them laugh,cry and scream
I could sleep forever,
to forget my everything and everyone.
tonight.
Lolly
Sunday, August 07, 2005
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4 comments:
who wouldn't sleep a little longer when the dream is so beautiful?
:)
iyer
Something lacking here?...somethings amiss..
..maybe I didn't get the idea behind it but I didn't have a reaction after I read it...and hence the delayed comment..
....thought and thought..but nothing..I guess if a poem doesn't stir a chord instantly it wasn't enjoyed as much as the others..:)
Waiting for a different shade of thoughts from you soon..
..I'm sleepy....
your getting lazy yar.
but this is not poetry appreciation class. so I say damn quality and beautifully strutured poetry. you write what you like.
yar.
this is the age of good charlotte and simple plan
not nirvana
:)
Lolly
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