Dil says
as my heart for you grows fonder,
I ponder
on choices and decisions I make and made
that makes me wonder
where this journey of mine would take me
and you; with all things falling under
in place;by hook, by crook or mere plunder
as if this life is not short of any more blunder
and endless squander
of thoughts and time on you,for you
and all this I ponder
as my heart for you grows fonder
Lolly
3 comments:
so is it your heart that grows fonder (u praising ur heart) or are you growing fonder of her (u feeling more for someone else) or is your heart growing fonder of her ( your heart seen as a seperate entity growing fonder for another entity)
I praise my heart as I grow fonder of her;thanks to him.
Lolly
It's beautiful! Effortless rhyme ... keep it up!
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