Friday, May 06, 2005

Flawed

I weep but there are not enough tears

my heart is broken but there are not enough pieces

I am wounded, but there is not enough bleeding

I am sorry but there is not enough sorrow

I pray for you but there are not enough prayers

I scream but there is not enough noise

I wait for you but there is not enough time

I dream of you but there is not enough sleep

I miss you but there is not enough You

and not enough Me.


Lolly

7 comments:

3 potties said...

Lolly,

i still dont know where you squeeze all this heart-broken pain from...we need to have a chat over beer!

iyer

3 potties said...

Lolly,

there is one thing u forgot to add :D

"I spend but there is not enough money" :P

iyer

Shuchi said...

I want to appreciate but there are not enough compliments..:)

I liked this...its a perfect triple S - Sweet, Short and Simple:)

BTW..I second Mr. Iyer..lol!

3 potties said...
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3 potties said...

I so wanted to include that line but there was not enough vanity :)

Anonymous said...

i love u guys' blog:)

Anonymous said...

Brothers!!

Cool Blog and absolutely cool poem!
As usual, here I am battling the blues. I just couldn’t get myself off the bed this morning. Had to literally drag myself out…God!! Why do we have Mondays?

I logged into my space and was quite surprised to see a comment posted by my Cuz!!Well Loll, you definitely turned that curve into a beautiful smile..
Did you know what a little rascal you were …Not like you’re anything less right now …no longer little but rascal you definitely are… But then brother’s are supposed to be that way and that’s what makes them special.

When it’s cloudy and everything’s dark, they almost always bring out this remarkable spark that leaves us glowing and shining ….Well loll, you’re a great cuz and yes, will always be my favorite (Now don’t start forwarding this to everyone to turn them green…. ;O)

And Hey, I’m never ever ever ever gonna give up on you!!!
Love you loads

Great work guyz, Keep the Blog ROLLING!!!!

Mamz
http://spaces.msn.com/members/mamtha/